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someone...
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:27:59 PM in AEST
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someone is hurting
and its all because of me
my immature nature
my silly little games
have driven someone to death
to kill yourself is just unbelievable
but to kill a life of not your own blood
inocience...
is just..a...sin...
its not like i knew
but its the fact that i do
thats making me think
that i should blink
and dust my eyes
from the life i thought i lived
sweet little thing
honest o so natural
seems to be the complete opposite
it does
i dont need nobody else to comfort me
though i thought it would help
all its really doing
is making me feel worse...
if thats possible
i would like to die
though i know that wouldnt help
someone would be in that special place
a life for a life
would only get me so far into hell
so i say it now and i believe its true
think of your actions before 'they' do
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-07-02 12:27:59]
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Re: someone...
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:36:07 PM AEST
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very good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: someone...
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:40:12 PM AEST
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thanks to everyone who read my poems even if it was like years ago...:P
sowwy for not replying i was sort of lost in everything and forgot x
o well:D
bye xxxxxxxx han |
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Re: someone...
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:24:48 PM AEST
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Very nice poem! Wow, you're a good writer. I enjoy reading your work and it is always some of the best that's out there.
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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