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Insane
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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banished from sanity
lurking behind the crowd
sensing pukid eyes
staring me from inside
iam the one they fear
the 'oddling' from the people
the step i took
the way they looked
as i lingered from side to side
iam the 'geek' of insanity
the one hope for the outcast and all
the sun of day
the moon of night
the candle to guide you on your way
i will be strong and never fail
i hope i dare to say
that dreaming is an insperation
and can happen any day
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-07-02 12:10:10]
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Re: Insane
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by C2C on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:18:17 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem. It took me a few reads but i caught on. What really stuck out to me was "iam the 'geek' of insanity." And i can't help thinking, considering the circumstances, that it is a good thing. hehe. Being an outcast, and a geek is a good thing. Nice concept. |
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Re: Insane
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:24:42 PM AEST
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Good write I like the "I am the one they fear" line, why walk the beaten path when you have to step over those grazing sheep running blindly around trying to justify themselves at the sight of someone that dissagrees with their way, scarey times,
"That dreaming is insperation"
damn good line |
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Re: Insane
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:54:12 PM AEST
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amazing write
PFR |
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Re: Insane
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:11:46 PM AEST
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an excellent poem from an excellent mind.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Insane
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:33:28 PM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me with your poetry. You are incredibly talented!
~Jenna |
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