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Snapshot
Contributed by
Stoney1
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:37:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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A drunken wretch lies
comotose in the gutter,
Cradling an empty jug
as if it were mother's milk;
encased in a wrinkled, brown paper bag,
Recent vomit soils his dirty coat
as he lays there, oblivious
to the pedestrians
who shy away from him in disgust,
The only living thing who
cares whether he lives or dies,
Lays curled beside him,
his muzzle pillowed
on the derelict's lap,
Waiting patiently
for him to stir
Stoney, Jan 1, 2003
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Stoney1
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2004-07-02 11:37:37]
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Re: Snapshot
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:58:12 AM AEST
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very powerful
pixie xx |
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Re: Snapshot
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by faffeee on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:15:46 PM AEST
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| definately - powerful, scary, sad. xx |
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