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I Miss You
Contributed by
juliETTE
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:00:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am sure it is not lonely on your side of Heaven’s door.
But it is hard for me to know that I cannot hold you anymore.
You sleep in the arms of angels and I guess I should be proud
If only I could see you safely tucked beneath some furry cloud.
I try to keep my spirits up but my heart only breaks again
When I imagine all you will never do, all the things you might have been.
There is no better place than Paradise; I so long to be there to,
Instead of walking this world cold and empty, missing everything about you.
Copyright ©
juliETTE
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2004-07-02 11:00:44]
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Re: I Miss You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:08:12 AM AEST
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My heart cries with and for you. She is with you every moment and always will be until you are reunited again.
Rita |
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Re: I Miss You
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:49:41 AM AEST
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| this was like a knife in my heart, well wriiten |
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Re: I Miss You
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by Kano on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:40:41 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem juliette so far this is the one I like the best very emotional and it makes the reader cry inside I loved it. Your poems just keep getting better and better I am very impressed I hope my poems speak as loud as yours because you have a gift that allows the reader to feel the pain that you were feeling while writing the poem, and that is very hard to accomplish, very good poem take care and I'll talk to you later...... Kane |
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