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I Miss You
Contributed by
juliETTE
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:51:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am sure it is not lonely on your side of Heaven’s door.
But it is hard for me to know that I cannot hold you anymore.
You sleep in the arms of angels and I guess I should be proud
If only I could see you safely tucked beneath some furry cloud.
I try to keep my spirits up but my heart only breaks again
When I imagine all you will never do, all the things you might have been.
There is no better place than Paradise; I so long to be there to,
Instead of walking this world cold and empty, missing everything about you.
Copyright ©
juliETTE
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2004-07-02 10:51:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Miss You
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:56:00 AM AEST (User
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Awwww this is so sad, but you have written this beautifully.....
pixie xx |
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Re: I Miss You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:12:28 AM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful writting. It sucks to lose someone you love. It's really sad that it happens. So you know I feel the same way you do. But you're right no better place than paradise. God bless you. |
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Re: I Miss You
(User Rating: 1 ) by silver_runaway on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 10:32:52 AM AEST (User
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Sad write, the feeling you put into this piece makes it
*laura* |
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