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She Sits
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:34:49 AM in AEST
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She sits so perfectly still,
Upon the painted window sill,
Longing to venture outside,
Instead of being locked up & confined.
Her room has become her prison,
Chances to break free have arisen,
But she sits looking so forlorn,
Twisting her hair that looks like corn.
For years she has feared the world,
She has become a frightened little girl,
All her friends have stopped calling round,
Because to the house she is now bound.
Her house used to be full of noise,
Of all the playful girls & boys,
But all that is now a distant memory,
She feels like everyone’s her enemy.
How she hates living with her fear,
Every night she cries a woeful tear,
This shouldn’t happen to a child,
Her parents can’t recall when she last smiled.
Sometimes she feels like dying,
When she can’t stop the crying,
She longs to go outside & play,
But agoraphobia stands firmly in her way
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Re: She Sits
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:45:23 AM AEST
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| great poem |
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Re: She Sits
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:49:51 AM AEST
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nicely written pixie. Very sad poem....
Kimberly |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:04:49 AM AEST
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This is a debilitating severe problem for many people in this world. I hope you are slowly overcoming it and finding a solution.
Hugs,
Rita |
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:22:50 AM AEST
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I hope that this part of life is put behind you so you can enjoy things such a touching write
Michelle |
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by wakegurl77 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:01:01 PM AEST
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awesome poem.......... very touching
Allways Sincere
leana |
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Re: She Sits
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:13:49 PM AEST
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xx ello pixie xx
i really enjoyed it
really talented:)
thank you for reading all my poems and commeting i know ive took a long time to reply but i only just noticed i had comments(silly me stuck in my only lil world)lol
well just wanted to say thanks and for sharing your talent with the world
xx hannah xx |
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Re: She Sits
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:19:30 PM AEST
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the was a wonderful poem,very smooth flow and very sad.you have an excellent talent
~vermillion~ |
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Re: She Sits
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:02:48 PM AEST
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very sad..... beautfiully written:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: She Sits
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by venkat on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:49:21 AM AEST
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what a pathetic picture?..welldone Krissy
ven |
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Re: She Sits
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:36:45 AM AEST
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Krissy this was a lovely write.
You seem to be able to use words with much ease. How I admire that. |
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Re: She Sits
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by frohemiasweetie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:35:07 PM AEST
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| I was totally unfamiliar with the existence of agoraphobia. Did u get over it? Great poem. |
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