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The Phonecall
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:01:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The Phonecall...
Hi ya babe,I'm running late
Yeah,I'm phoning from the cell
Stuck in this city's madness
Still I've good news to tell
How was your day,did you get my note
I left it by your keys
Just wanted to remind you
How much you mean to me
I went to see the doctor
In my lunch hour break
Yes Im fine,don't worry
It's sweet,the fuss you make
Have I mentioned that I love you
Yes,I say it all the time
But today I feel it even more
So happy you are mine
Well,listen babe,it's raining
And the traffics quite a mess
I should be home in an hour
Thirty minutes at its best
Oh you've cooked our dinner??
Sweetheart that's really great
And while we are eating
I'll fill you in on my lunch date
Ok babe,bye for now
See you in a while
Lotsa kisses,teddy hugs
And a great big happy smile
Excuse me sir,do you own
A blue and silver sedan
Well,I'm afraid I have bad news
I'll explain the best I can
You see sir,in the rain tonight
It's understood and known
A drunk driver hit your wife head on
Sir,she won't be coming home
Please sir,yes I'm sorry
But you'll have to come downtown
To identify her body
And collect her things we found
Im sorry for your loss sir
This must be hard for you
A drunken driver takes the lives
Of your wife,and baby too
I apologise,excuse me sir
I thought you were aware
There's confirmation of pregnancy
In the autopsy report there
Hi ya babe,yeah it's me
I'm calling from heavens door
I just called to say we love you
But wont be coming home no more
Have I mentioned that I love you
Yes,I say it all the time
But today I feel it even more
As I hold our baby,yours and mine
Ok babe,bye for now
We'll see you in a while
Lotsa kisses,teddy hugs
And a great big happy smile....
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
... [
2004-07-02 09:01:58]
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Re: The Phonecall
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by _Raspberry_ on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:37:06 AM AEST
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| Wow. This one made me cry. My brother-in-law was killed by a drunk driver. Very good, show people the worst so they can do the best..... |
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Re: The Phonecall
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by WoodyMc44 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:50:14 AM AEST
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| My Oh My, now this is poetry, and its real, God Bless you and keep it coming. I will certainly be reading your stuff |
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Re: The Phonecall
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by juliette on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:13:45 AM AEST
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This is so good.....and so sad. I love to read poetry with a point, a true message that comes across so blatantly and gracefully at the same time.
Thanks for sharing......
juliette |
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Re: The Phonecall
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:39:25 AM AEST
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I have a lump in my throat while reading this, this is awful, I am so so sorry ((((HUGS))))
You have written it beautiful I must say
pixie xx |
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Re: The Phonecall
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:19:10 AM AEST
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I cried so much reading these words, The tears dont want to stop falling for it was real and tore at my heart. May all take the message do NOT drink and drive it costs so many lives.
Beautifully written
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: The Phonecall
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:34:10 PM AEST
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This is a good example of why I don't like to watch the news. Life can be so horribly tragic at times... and I'm often struck by how casually tragic news is shared and heard... I find comfort in knowing that at least one person was moved enough to write something so touching. You've impressed me in more ways than one.
Beautiful and incredibly thoughtful of you,
SNM |
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