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my eyes open
Contributed by
coldestflame
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:57:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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hmm.. sumthin i rote after a breakup.. lookin back.. somehow this pome kinda makes those times seem worse.. nah.. but they cant have have been.. c..im still standin.. alone.. but standin..
Surprising that
with these eyes closed
i see much more
than i did before
that isnt me
deep down in ur eyes
im bereft of a place
in that soul of ice
each spoken word
seems filled with vile
"if u love me..."
so much like a ploy
holdin u close
cudnt mattr no more
cuz sumthins come
between us both
hows it that
whats good from afar
can be so far
from good somehow
surprisin u
arnt the one i love
so was i dreamin
with my eyes open??
..g
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2004-07-02 04:57:52]
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Re: my eyes open
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:23:53 AM AEST
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| wonderful poem, keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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Re: my eyes open
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:33:29 AM AEST
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great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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