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Dear Boy
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:43:41 AM in AEST
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i think that i am ready
ready to be found.
i am finally ready
to put my feet on the ground.
But please don't forget
that my name is tina not nicole.
i am fragile and weak
just a battered soul.
i've been through so much
yet you still will not see
the little girl hidden
deep inside of me.
It took a long time before
i decided to give you my heart,
but be careful with it
It was black from the start.
So here i leave it with you
take care of it as i have done
for now you have two
and i have none.
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eternityandaday4u
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2004-07-02 00:43:41]
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Re: Dear Boy
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by positivelypurple on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:05:58 AM AEST
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| Very nice write...we are often guarded in a new relationship and you express this nicely. |
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Re: Dear Boy
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:27:35 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work, you've got a lot of talent.
~Jenna |
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Re: Dear Boy
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by desireemiote on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:08:18 PM AEST
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great poem. i can see it happening. I especially love the last two lines.
"now you have two
and I have none"
Ive written many poems about handing over a heart but never used that analogy... i absolutely love it! |
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