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Killing yourself
Contributed by
Lovely_4_Steve
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Can't you see what your doing?
Every time you do it your killing yourself..
I tried to save you so many times..
Everytime you promised you would stop...
I knew you wouldn't but I still tried..
I cry every night knowing I can't save you..
I tried... I keep telling myself it will stop..
Because you promised you would stop..
Guess you lied.. again..
Maybe I should give up..
Maybe I should jus stop caring..
But I have tried before..
It's hard..
I don't think I can keep up with all this pain.
I keep trying to stop you..
But you jus push me away... Saying leave me alone..
Can't you see your killing yourself..
Why do you have to be so stupid??
Why do you have to kill your life like this?
Your jus letting your self waste away...
Like your nothing...
You don't care..
But I still do..
But you won't listen...
So you'll jus keep killing yourself...
No matter what I do...
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Lovely_4_Steve
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2004-07-01 23:40:30]
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Re: Killing yourself
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by waos on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:09:49 AM AEST
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| i don't know what i would change. i think you did a pretty good job on it. |
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Re: Killing yourself
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by tifrob on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:18:49 AM AEST
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I think it's wonderful the way it is. You grab the reader and don't let go till you're finished.
J~ |
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Re: Killing yourself
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 05:24:51 AM AEST
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I wouldn't change a thing...... This is a great poem..... Very good write.....
Keep up the good work
~!*!~Much Love~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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