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A drop(villanelle) by cauchy3
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cauchy3
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:31:03 PM in AEST
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A drop (villanelle)
Swiftly flow upward to swear
Opposite to our men s efforts
What drop down are lots of crimes
Hares flee but tigers flit
Truths are hard to carry or omit
Swiftly flow upward to swears
Hells are cups full to brims
Life is like lambs that aren’t strong
What drop down are lots of crimes
Things still are real but not thin
Shams are Eves with her doors to open
Swiftly flow upward to swear
Still have faiths on rules that are firm
Planets have to move round the orbits
What drop down are lots of crimes
I keep my moneys in lazy bins
Life is to swim in poor pools
Swiftly flow upward to swear
What drop down are lots of crimes
-----villanelle by Cheung shun sang=cauchy3------
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Re: A drop(villanelle) by cauchy3
(User Rating: 1 ) by pastiche247 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:44:57 AM AEST (User
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A fascinating set of thoughts.
Fine images, such as:
"Hares flee but tigers flit
Truths are hard to carry or omit"
Well done, thanks for sharing.
Best,
Peter
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