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What's The Point
Contributed by
Lovely_4_Steve
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What's the point of this?
Why do I even bother?
You want to know why?
Because I cared..
I trusted you.
I tried to be your friend..
What did you do?
You lied..
I cried.
I tried.
I failed.
I wanted to leave...
I wanted to stay...
But if I stayed I would just be giving in.
I keep telling myself I have to try...
I can't give up, I can't give in either..
I won't get mad...
I won't let you get to me.
What's the point I ask myself.
What's the point of even trying?
What's the point, of being me?
When you don't even like the real me?
So what's the point?
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Lovely_4_Steve
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2004-07-01 23:19:51]
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Re: What's The Point
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 05:22:15 AM AEST
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Very good write...... I liked this poem very much....
Keep up the good work
~!*!~Much Love~!*!~
~!*!~Amber~!*!~ |
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Re: What's The Point
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by Urizen on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 02:48:32 PM AEST
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| Vey strong feelings being expressed, a good poem. |
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