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Precious Stones
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:18:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Precious stones do not become you
Your outer layer washed away.
Now we see your true persona
We won’t ask for you to stay.
Gold your not, and Silver never,
Pearls tossed before the swine.
Leave, just Leave and run forever,
I am so glad you were not mine.
Copyright ©
MLCstar
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2004-07-01 23:18:54]
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Re: Precious Stones
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:08:26 AM AEST
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| well stated! |
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Re: Precious Stones
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 06:54:31 AM AEST
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very good write,
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Re: Precious Stones
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:58:10 PM AEST
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I loved this one. I'm new to your poetry so I haven't a clue. But the poem itself is wonderful.
J~ |
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Re: Precious Stones
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by Sinned on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:20:44 PM AEST
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You wrote this for my ex didn't you ? Good write.
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