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A Rapid Loss Of Hope In Love
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:10:33 PM in AEST
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Today another day wasted.
Plastered to the floor I slowly arise.
Too much of my despise your not there.
You said you would be here for me.
All I hear are your lies and false hopes.
With this veil I hide in vain.
This is the essence of my pain.
I never had nothing to gain.
But everything to lose to you.
I wished you were here.
Now I pray that your gone.
You left me for now and ever.
To me your dead and never really existed at all.
You were only apart of me.
A figment of my immagination.
Now I scream out at all of my fears.
Wasted years with my troubled past.
For when the time comes I wont hold back.
With all my rage you'll be stuffed inside a cage.
So when you arise from your sweet vanity.
You wont find me lying next to you.
I will be travelling upon the mountain top.
And ***** on your grave.
Because tru;y I am the last one alive.
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Mortis-Dark
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2004-07-01 23:10:33]
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Re: A Rapid Loss Of Hope In Love
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by MLCstar on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:13:00 AM AEST
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| The best thing about writing, especially poetry, is that you get to tell off the people that hurt you the most. Not a bad write. |
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Re: A Rapid Loss Of Hope In Love
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:27:55 PM AEST
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| This was a very deep poem and greatly written and wonderful. I loved this poem. Keep writing like this and it will get you far. Love::::Kirby |
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