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Bleeding Tears
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:35:47 PM in AEST
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Bleeding Tears
Make me bleed
To save thee
Never enough
To please thee
My blood means nothing
To thee
Yet you make me bleed
For your own reasons
I'm bleeding tears
My tears mean nothing
To thee
Yet you make me see
That I'm nothing
That I don't deserve to live
And that I should die
Because of what I did
When it was in the past
I'm bleeding tears
I mean nothing to you
You make sure that I know
That I'm never more
Than what I deserve
An eternal life of Hell
My soul will forever burn
My heart will forever mourn
My mind will forever scorn
My bleeding for thee
My tears for thee
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essentially9
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2004-07-01 21:35:47]
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:12:11 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this except no one, including yourself, deserves 'an eternal life of hell'. I really enjoyed the repetition of 'thee' it was neat for lack of a better word.
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:19:03 PM AEST
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words cannot express the emotion sent out from reading your write...good job...
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Re: Bleeding Tears
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by Mortis-Dark on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:13:08 PM AEST
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Ah this is art. Bleeding tears are sought by all. You get them when you get what you expect the most. The denial of a loved on can be hard. Bit only time can heal these wounds. Great write.
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