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Fell for You
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fell for You
I tried to be someone you would like
But I never was good enough
You told me it wasn't meant to be
There was someone other than me
You told me how you hated me
And I never was the same
You hurt me more than I can say
And I slice and dice because of this
You did this inadvertently
But it seems you did it intentionally
You told me how you hated me
And I transformed for nothing
For nothing I have become
I became what I hated
I became another face in the crowd
Another face with a frown
So lost in what I never found
But who says I never was good enough?
When I had it all
And I lost it all
Just to die in the fall
But who says I never was good enough?
Just to die for it all
I became someone I didn't know
For nothing I have become
Just to die in the fall
And I fall away to another day
When I never knew your face
And I can't grasp what I had
Because I lost it all
Because of you
Because I die
I fell for you
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Re: Fell for You
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by Vonna on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:15:56 AM AEST
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| You did a great job and that' s also how I felt about someone I truly love and care about because I was the one changing at that exact point of time but also while I changing for him at that exact point of time I was crashing down into deep scary and unkown sea and he was just laying back not changing for me. |
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Re: Fell for You
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:38:41 PM AEST
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Great poem..I loved this one so much..
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Re: Fell for You
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:00:33 AM AEST
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an interesting stroke of the pen ..
not what I'm accustomed to
from you:
"You hurt me more than I can say
And I slice and dice because of this"
I wonder about those couple lines-
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