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Teardrops From Heaven
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:26:11 PM in AEST
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Let the teardrops fall from heaven,
Like snowflakes in the winter,
Let it drench the land and give it life,
Let it nourish with drips of silver.
Let the lilies bloom with hues of white,
And watch rivers flow with elegance,
A single raindrop from clouds above,
Sparks a string of majestic miracles.
Let us ponder on lush green meadows,
On beauty evoked and washed away pain,
Such picturesque wonders of solitude,
Today we shall embrace the rain.
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:32:38 PM AEST
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Such picturesque imagery in this poem. I could visualize every scene. You did a splendid job here.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:35:33 PM AEST
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A truly lovely poem blueheart.
i too see real beauty in these things,
and you have put their essense into words
so beautifully |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by sayoko on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:46:42 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. Great use of imagery. |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by venkat on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:26:24 AM AEST
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Nature's beauty in poetry painted wonderfully .plese never stop to write your poems on nature..these have a spl.way to touch the human heart...loved its read.
sincerely. venkat |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:20:00 AM AEST
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Hi blueheart,
loved this poem it was very beautiful, perfectly descibed, you have great imagination.....
pixie xx |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by mountainhigh on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:27:50 AM AEST
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and breath in that heavenly sweet scent, and yes ponder the tearsdrops of Heaven.
Beautiful, I can close my eyes and feel the sweet warm Summer rain.
Thank you for sharing,
Chris |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:54:39 PM AEST
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beautiful hanna:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by Kie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:44:45 AM AEST
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When I read a poem like this I long to have written it. I begin begging for a muse and pray that it comes and soon. :)
The title was perfection and the poem was like words forming imagery to come alive on a page in my mind.
Poetry at its finest. |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:49:34 AM AEST
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aahh yes. heavenly beautifull write.
luv it.
huggs, peace,
emy |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:30:55 PM AEST
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Oh blueheart......you have no blueheart.
Your writes are eloquent, and never end.
You take me to places I've already been,
recalling the beauty and finery of things I've forgotten in the past.
You are loaded with talent, my dear....never stop writing your beautiful poems.....time they will out last!
Love,
lovingcritters
Consue
P.S. I love Malaysia......a friend of mine married a man from there he is so loving and kind! |
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Re: Teardrops From Heaven
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:27:23 PM AEST
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| beautiful write. =] |
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