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thoughts
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:18:08 PM in AEST
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I can't remeber what it felt like
to feel good is the enigma
life is this way though
like sand escapes a clutching fist
life seems to slip further and further away
does the sun still shine on anyone
I remember the sweet brush of sun
thirsty all the time now
even lemonade can't quench
faith is lost
scars are bleeding
and nobody knows what I mean
so they refer to me as a fool
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2004-07-01 20:18:08]
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Re: thoughts
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:20:57 PM AEST
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This is very sad yet very good....I hope that no one is refered to as a fool because every one person does foolish things in life so there is no need to call anyone a fool..Good job...
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Re: thoughts
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:22:17 PM AEST
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Your no fool.. very talented nevertheless..
great examples .. Loved it
Tugs and hugs
~neglected1~ |
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