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Un forseen love
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Many seem they know what life brings; but how do you know?
Things come and go, and the it seems to flow?but what does it give you?
People are so simple, yet complex. And the ones who seem the less complicated, or the worse
I see things in the air that make you wonder what does one see, in anything
You find the one; the one who makes you smile, laugh, cry and do all that else brings things to your life
Then it is simple, all things are, simple, but we make complex.
I haven t found the answer, you see, because all of them, wouldn, t had to be seen
One day, in time, I know in my heart, I will find
The one who takes all time
They will make my life unseen
And all that,s happen be in-between
That, s where life is simple
LOVE
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Re: Un forseen love
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:17:22 PM AEST
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This is so true...I know exactly where you're coming from....Because Life has it's twists, it's turns and it's boulders....and you never know when they're going to come..Keep writing!
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Re: Un forseen love
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:20:10 PM AEST
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I think many people can relate to this.. pushing and pulling different views.. great write
tugs and hugs
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Re: Un forseen love
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:25:51 PM AEST
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Not all see, becuse all only see one side of the total, and usually the side that is theirs...what about the unselfish side, the one who could have heaven with merely a jesture, but sees the selfishness in that and stays outside looking in.....who sees that outside image....no one but they who look in..
Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
Chris |
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