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The Thunder Comes
Contributed by
merry
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:11:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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terrified in the heat of afternoon
chilled to the bone, boredom
eats brain cells and spits out ideas
strewn across the grass
a trail of half chewed thoughts
dangle lifelessly from trees
a breeze stirs them, but not to life
all but forgotten in dreams
despair filling in the blanks
footsteps ring hollow
gliding from day into night
anger bangs against the walls
echoing down the river
on its way to the sea
greedily devoured by tides
who ridicule thunder with a constant roar
still the thunder comes
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-07-01 19:11:17]
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Re: The Thunder Comes
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by bj111 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:28:57 AM AEST
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Really liked this piece. Reads well aloud. (Have u read this in public? Would be a good piece for it.) Luv'd 'half chewed thoughts dangle...' .
Very well done. Keep writing...bob |
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Re: The Thunder Comes
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:08:09 PM AEST
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exceptional and so vivid, so beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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