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Little less
Contributed by
MaRy_JaNe_420
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:33:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Wanting so badly to end it all,
Shoot myself now watch me fall.
No one will cry for me when I'm dead,
Drop to ground bullet in head.
Crushed by all your little cracks,
Pushed by all your little smacks,
Driven by all your ***** *****
Nothing left to say responds by twichen'
You fueled the rage that's me!
I'm wrong? Gotta be,
That's the way It's Always been,
I'm stempy your Ren,
Just a little dumber than you!
Just a little less.
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MaRy_JaNe_420
... [
2004-07-01 18:33:49]
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Re: Little less
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:57:54 PM AEST
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Can definitely feel the anger in this poem.
your sharp words and blunt ends to your lines reinforce that. |
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Re: Little less
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:18:11 PM AEST
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| Hey I Like This I Can Feel Some Pain Into The Poem But I Can Say You Feel Sad Also |
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