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Big Brown Eyes
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:46:15 PM in AEST
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I'm so scared of him
what he does to me.
The way he makes me feel,
the pain is all gone,
the heartache lost and died.
My friends saw the change in me,
and some of them do not like it.
although I've changed for the better.
They know I love him,
but they want him to love me back.
The trust I have for him is endless.
The friendship we have is tight and close.
I'm not shy,
but with him I can't speak,
only look,
his eyes,
his smile so bright,
his smell so addicting,
his arms so strong,
his presence makes me feel safe.
They save I have him wrapped
around my finger,
that I can get whatever I want from him.
But that's not true.
I'm young and immature,
but I know what love means.
Big brown eyes can hypnotize.
I realize, I get lost in my thoughts.
And trying to get the words out is hard enough.
But when his arms wrap around me;
it takes all my strength to move,
to just let go.
but those eyes,
when they look into mine,
it's just me and him
no one else.
Oh those eyes,
and that smile,
those strong arms,
that addicting smell,
so sweet, so alluring;
I can't hold back any more.
But as long as he looks
at me with those eyes.
Those big brown eyes.
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Re: Big Brown Eyes
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:49:25 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, well done!
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Re: Big Brown Eyes
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:56:04 PM AEST
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very good poem..
Keep it up...
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Jamie |
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