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Lonley
Contributed by
k8n07
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish you were here with me,
I am in so much pain,
Where are you?
Without you I’m going insane.
I miss you,
I want you here with me,
I can’t stand this anymore,
Please hurry quickly.
I need you to come,
If you don’t I’ll die,
I’m telling you the truth,
I wouldn’t lie.
Yes, you’re here!
I’m so glad,
Where have you been?
I’ve been so sad.
Please stay with me forever,
We can live in peace together,
You say you have to leave,
No you won’t, never!
Now you’re gone,
Please come back,
I will suffer deeply,
I’ll have a heart attack.
I don’t understand this,
Where are you off to?
You’re not the guy I knew,
What’s wrong with you?
How could you do this to me?
After all we’ve been through,
You’ve changed,
Who are you?
Copyright ©
k8n07
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2004-07-01 16:33:38]
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Re: Lonley
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:37:39 PM AEST
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Awwww this is so sad, great write tho
pixie xx |
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Re: Lonley
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by MLCstar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:08:50 PM AEST
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| Keep them comming. You are remarkably talented. The emotions are so strongly conveyed. |
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Re: Lonley
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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very good write! Keep it up!
Love,
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