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Flaw
Contributed by
shadowed
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Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I don't act my true self in front of them
Perhaps because I am alone and they have another
The depths to which they lie are known only to one
And it is for this reason that I am afraid
The mysterious has a way with me
An endless darkness that makes me shutter
Two small black pools in a sea of white has power
Power to turn me red
Power to make me sweat
Power to make me shake
But the power is not a power,
But rather a weakness
A weakness in me.
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2002-10-22 20:30:00]
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Re: Flaw
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by InexactExactness on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 06:01:54 AM AEST
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| Pretty good job. Few short poems have such depth. |
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Re: Flaw
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 06:13:35 AM AEST
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cool, and an awsome write, if this is how you feel sometimes, i know how it is.
"Diese Tag eure letsten sin..." |
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