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Without Thou Love
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:17:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Without thou love's affection,
I can only cease precious time
with lonely days, for my hearts release.
Without thou love's affection,
Scoffing the curse eyes convene
For they display nothing I can achieve.
Without thou love's affection,
I weaken and stray towards testing fate
That which will become a lonely peace.
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2004-07-01 15:17:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Without Thou Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by neglected1 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:33:19 PM AEST (User
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very Shakespeare ... i enjoyed it
keep up the great work
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Re: Without Thou Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:44:12 PM AEST (User
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Wow,this is one of the bests lost love poems I have ever read.I really really loved your outstanding verses,you have beautiful talent!Keep posting,I will be sure to check out more of your work soon,
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Re: Without Thou Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:03:59 PM AEST (User
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very strong poem, moving and sadly beautiful..... hugs n' love nessa
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