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Emotional Release
Contributed by
Steven_Fenton1982
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:07:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I never thought I'd feel this way,
I hardly know you, but you're on my mind.
I never imagined with this distance,
that I could feel this much inside.
I doubt you feel the same inside for me,
but I can't help dreaming of us together.
And I don't know what you would feel,
if I gazed deep into your beautiful eyes.
I'd give anything.....
To hold you,
to kiss you.
I'd give anything.....
To have you here by my side,
to whisper these foolish words.
I was just a dying rose, you came along,
and like the rain, you gave me life.
I was just a fading figure in my own mind,
but you have released me from my shadow.
Yeah, I want to take your photo with my mind!
So when I close my eyes you're always there!
Copyright ©
Steven_Fenton1982
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2004-07-01 14:07:52]
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Re: Emotional Release
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:27:32 PM AEST
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awww you should tell her how you feel :)
lovely poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Emotional Release
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:39:48 PM AEST
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| Not foolish...wonderfull, very soothing. |
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Re: Emotional Release
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:17:04 PM AEST
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so sweet.. you should Defiantly tell her how you feel... it would be a surprise if she didnt fall for a sweetie like you..
~neglected1~ |
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