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Soulseeker
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:52:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So new to the world
Thinking I had seen it all
So sure of all I thought I knew
Of Life, Of love,
I didn't have a clue
I stepped too quickly
I didn't think enough
Now I know a little more,
And now I think too much
A glimpse of happiness
His love invades my thoughts
Inspiring other promises broken
Opportunities shot
A vow,
I wish that I could keep
Of love,
Until eternal sleep
His grey eyes dive within my soul
How quickly I invite him in
My affair, My love,
My Sin
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_Raspberry_
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2004-07-01 13:52:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Soulseeker
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:03:40 PM AEST (User
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wonderful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Soulseeker
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:24:00 PM AEST (User
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Very relatable read. But it happens not just to those that marry young. It happens to some that marry too soon, and to those that lose interest after time. It made a fabulous write nonetheless.
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