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I'm Trying to Find Me
Contributed by
Colleen
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:11:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm trying to figure out exactly who I want to be
There's so many doors to unlock with this one little key
You're trying to help, but you're just getting in the way
Please just stop where you're at and stay
I promise I'll come around when I'm done
I just want to live and have fun
But you're stressing me out
I'm starting to hate you without a doubt
You were never forced to be superior
While trying to fix a troubled interior
I know you just want what's best for me
I'm not going to beg and plead for you to leave me be
Stay out of my way
At least for today
I need to find myself on my own
In the end, you'll be surprised by how much I've grown
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-07-01 13:11:10]
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Re: I'm Trying to Find Me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:22:43 PM AEST
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Jus cut loose and be yourself.
good writing.
No one has the right to put demands on u like that.
good luck.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: I'm Trying to Find Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:53:10 PM AEST
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we all need time to discover who we really are... great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: I'm Trying to Find Me
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:45:18 PM AEST
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Excellent write!
Jenni |
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Re: I'm Trying to Find Me
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:23:15 PM AEST
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| A great write on self searching. Wonderful. :) |
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Re: I'm Trying to Find Me
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:12:40 PM AEST
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Hi! I can relate to this poem its what I'm doing to do right now.
w/luv 4 lyfe
Care
ps good write I loved it |
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