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Marley: Adored, Torn, and now choking
Contributed by
rhei76
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:51:44 AM in AEST
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We will never talk again
Life broke different fork
What can I say my friend
Life it"s own little joke
And I'm starting to choke
On ashes of memories adorne
It's not the same
It's not the same
Oh, how it's changed
We will never tell again
Of broken dreams & clouds
What can I give my friend
Life is starving me
As I choke on the memories
Of ashes on dreams adorne
It has changed
It has changed
Never to be the same
It is different
While I choke
On ashes of memories so torn
They've torn the page
Like words they no longer say
Sometimes I feel they took it all away
While I eat the ashes ands start to decay
They took you away
But memories they stay
I wanted you all of the day
But now I choke on the feelings
That once made me feel okay
I'm starving
Choking
Hoping on dreams
But these ashes take my voice
Till no longer I can scream
Oh, where's my dream
My beautiful, preccious queen
Feels like I've lost everything
When we were torn apart
Aw, numb is the feeing of my heart
Choking on a life that was once adorn
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rhei76
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2004-07-01 09:51:44]
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Re: Marley: Adored, Torn, and now choking
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:12:50 PM AEST
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awww, i know well how you feel, seems i have to also write out what happened in my life and about who i lost, big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Marley: Adored, Torn, and now choking
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by Destined_for_this on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:23:36 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. It's deep pain is expressed beautifuly. Great work! |
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Re: Marley: Adored, Torn, and now choking
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by flamingblade on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 03:32:09 PM AEST
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so very beautiful
deep and makes me choke up
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