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Making Love
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:50:27 AM in AEST
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When we make love,
We fit just like hand in glove,
Our bodies are made for one another,
You are such a passionate lover.
Holding onto you so tight,
As we let go & take flight,
Forget about the big, wide world,
As you make my dainty toes curl.
Making love to you is magic,
You are what makes my body tick,
Fireworks exploding in my head,
As we lovingly share a bed.
You take me up to cloud nine,
To a place that is wholly mine,
Make my desires all come true,
Loving my soul through & through.
You give me what I’ve not had before,
By taking my body on this heavenly tour,
Rocking me from side to side,
As I pull you deeper inside.
My orgasm washes over me,
Like a powerful, rough sea,
Then we melt into another place,
Now our dreams we are to face.
What we have is much more than sex,
I wonder where you’ll take me to next,
Love with you is so great,
Can’t wait to climb in bed & seal our fate.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-01 09:50:27]
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Re: Making Love
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:56:07 AM AEST
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Kick ass. Great poem. Very heart warming to hear you're in love. God bless you.
Peace and glory. |
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Re: Making Love
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:58:08 AM AEST
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This is just way cool.Its light,its fun and very very thought provoking *looks for distraction*
:)
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Re: Making Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:01:16 PM AEST
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I know the beauty of this kind of love. The lust is nice but the love takes you higher than you have ever been.
Rita |
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Re: Making Love
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:04:32 PM AEST
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wonderful imagery pixie. i really like this poem, makes me want to write one like it myself.
Holding onto you so tight,
As we let go & take flight,
Forget about the big, wide world,
As you make my dainty toes curl.
i love these lines. 4 stars, good job. |
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Re: Making Love
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:22:03 PM AEST
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beautiful, romantic, loving, sensuous and classy:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Making Love
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:06:52 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, everyone deserves to feel like that. |
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Re: Making Love
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:01:44 PM AEST
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WOW.......I THINK I SHALL NEVER WRITE OF LOVE AGAIN AFTER READING THIS....WELL I'LL TRY BUT I WILL NEVER EVER COME CLOSE TO THIS FLOWING MASTER PEICE.
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Re: Making Love
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by mountainhigh on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:41:28 AM AEST
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To make sweet love as this, from that first tender and gentle kiss, to be in that spirit of bliss.....is a place no where else to be found.
Beautiful portrait of making sweet love, thank you for sharing.
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