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I Need A Friend
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:48:04 AM in AEST
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Feel a bit blue today,
My heart has not got much to say,
Although it beats, it hangs low,
The day is going by so slow.
Want someone to talk to,
Chase away these feelings of blue,
Right now I could do with a friend,
Who has an ear or shoulder to lend.
There’s no reason for me to smile,
My happiness has gone out of style,
One day I’m up, then I’m down,
Someone keeps knocking off my crown.
Why is no-one here for me,
I feel alone but nobodies here to see,
You always seem to be at work,
Every time I’m feeling hurt.
I tell you that I feel depressed,
That I can’t even face getting dressed,
But you don’t seem like you care,
You don’t know how I feel when you’re not there.
I sit & wait for you to come home,
I’m so fed up of feeling alone,
You say you understand but you don’t
I know that this isn’t your fault.
I tried to talk to you last night,
But I was quickly losing the fight,
As all you did was fall asleep,
So my sadness had to keep.
How I wish you understood,
That sometimes I just feel no good,
Even though I feel very sad,
Our relationship’s the best I’ve ever had.
You make me happy, depression makes me cry,
I want to live forever, but I also want to die,
Please come home I need a hug,
Help me out of this hole that’s been dug.
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pixie
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2004-07-01 09:48:04]
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Re: I Need A Friend
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:04:52 PM AEST
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Krissy, this is a poem of a depressed person as you know. I am going to PM you and send you my email addie. I would like for you to contact me.
You do not have to live like this.
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Re: I Need A Friend
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:15:25 PM AEST
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awww.......... well, you know im always here for you, and you can ask rita, my letters tend to get a little lengthy:) big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I Need A Friend
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:48:16 PM AEST
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My days would be exactly the same way if I didn't have my job. It's one of the best things that's ever happened to me. It gets me out and about for hours every day, keeps me busy, I love it to bits, and my coworkers are all awesome people.
Just food for thought. I never thought having a job would be so good for me.
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Re: I Need A Friend
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:49:34 PM AEST
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AwwwChrissie, I know these feelings so well. And talking with someone may help out alot! But it seems Mark is the one who needs to listen!!! Email me or pm, I'd love to have someone to talk to too! :-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: I Need A Friend
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by Monkeybones99 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:18:27 PM AEST
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| I just wanted to say I don't get on here much and now that I'm going back to school it will be even less but you could contact me at leftofcenter99@yahoo.com my name is Jen.Wanted to say great poem even though it is sad.....*hugs to you*. |
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Re: I Need A Friend
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:18:25 PM AEST
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| Pixie, I can tell you by the end of the day you would have made more friends on the site. People on the site are here for you whenever you need a hand. I hope you feel better. :) |
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Re: I Need A Friend
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by pander on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:15:45 PM AEST
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This poem is so sad. And I can relate to it so much!
I always think great writing can stir an emotion in the reader. All you need do is look at the previous comments for this piece to see how emotions have been stirred.
Even in such sadness, you still write so beautifully.
Pander
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