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leave me
Contributed by
jayson
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:40:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The moonlight shone through my window,
scattering shadows across the floor.
The pieces there left me puzzled,
a feeling I never felt before.
The ceiling opened up and poured a silence so concrete.
A moment so unavoidable,I could'nt move my feet.
We allowed others to remove our presence.
These moments without you are not so pleasent.
Listening to fools caused our love to fall,
but the shadows of our memories still remain on my wall.
Copyright ©
jayson
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2004-07-01 03:40:56]
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Re: leave me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:47:16 AM AEST
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Sad but very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: leave me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:29:57 AM AEST
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awww this is very sad, but you have expressed it well.....
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