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Tell Me What To Do
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:42:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Taste the fear
That seeps out of me
Swallow it whole
Sympathetically
Tell me not to care
So much
And I will try
To listen
I’ll scream first
Ignore you
Frustrate you
Blame you
But, eventually
I’ll try
A little
Maybe
(Maybe not)
See the echoes
Bouncing inside me
Blind me then
Ignorantly
Tell me it’s time
To move on
And I will try
To adhere
I’ll flail first
Disregard you
Irritate you
Resent you
But eventually
I’ll try
A bit
Maybe
(Maybe not)
Seriously
Tell Me
Yell at me
Wreck me
Really
I want you to
And you want to
So...
Tell Me!
So I can
Get on with
Telling you no
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
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2004-07-01 00:42:24]
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Re: Tell Me What To Do
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:13:54 AM AEST
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| Ill tell you what to do, never ever stop writing! your poems are strong and so are you I know deep down you know what to do, even though sometimes you may not want to listen to what you hear. another stunning piece. I hope you find the peace within yourself soon. always here for you- holder |
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Re: Tell Me What To Do
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:45:32 AM AEST
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Very good creative, catchy write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tell Me What To Do
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:51:25 AM AEST
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yes please never stop writing.. you are amazingly talented...
pixie xx |
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Re: Tell Me What To Do
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by brigitte7735 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:23:55 PM AEST
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oh baby...its like there is no style you cant do, and this is such a great new thing for you...its like the format that makes me love the songs i do.
Maybe...Maybe not..glorious
Always,
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Re: Tell Me What To Do
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:37:29 PM AEST
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This is one of those that needs to be read aloud to get a feel for the passion within. Great poetry.
wildejohnny.
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Re: Tell Me What To Do
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:03:53 PM AEST
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This is really an awesome poem, Snem. And boy, wow, I can totally relate to this one too. Ceptin' I'm relating it to someone else in my life...and especially that day...the day it was posted...it's the day before her birthday and interestingly enough....I eventually started having these exact same thoughts.
You state things so brilliantly.
May I hire you as my speech writer? ;-)
Timber
:-)
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