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Regret
Contributed by
juliETTE
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 10:42:34 PM in AEST
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My world, shattered
Still the Earth moves beneath me
Daring me to keep up with the pace of life.
Death dare not pause
And wait for me to love enough,
But leaves all the moments thereafter to regret.
Every smile left uncaptured,
Each touch taken for granted,
Tears tumbling before you could dry them,
Slipping into oblivion,
Though now, you yourself
Would stare death in the eye
For just one more second
Or less.
Copyright ©
juliETTE
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2004-06-30 22:42:34]
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Re: Regret
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 10:49:51 PM AEST
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I am so terribly sorry for your loss. Losing a child is so difficult. I can only offer condolesces because I know there is really nothing I can say to ease your pain. I am sorry, truly, for your loss and pain.
Rita |
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Re: Regret
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 10:52:11 PM AEST
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Oh, Juliette - this is a beautiful, though heartwrenching, poem.
Death dare not pause
And wait for me to love enough
I am very touched by this piece. I am truly sorry for your loss. As much as I like this poem - I wish you never had to write it.
Sincerely,
SNM
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Re: Regret
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:04:01 AM AEST
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awww i cant even begin to imagine how you are feeling, *hugs* this is so sad .. I am truly sorry for your loss
takecare
]pixie xx |
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Re: Regret
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:16:31 AM AEST
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| all ur poems are excellent you have a gift and i am glad that you realise that thank you ur poems are touching ad i can relate to some of them take care xgripx |
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Re: Regret
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by Maxximus on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:05:15 PM AEST
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| Painful and honest to the core, the poem is excellent. We all need a way to vent and it seems you've found a good one. We can all find strength even in our greatest weaknesses, hang in there. |
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