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All Alone
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:44:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Had a dream
about you and me
we were all alone
in a field of moans,
tenderly i kiss
your sweet lips
as we dance we dip
to a song
that only we know.
Our bodies
are trembling
here
deep in the woods
shadows are rising
under a full moon,
had a dream
we were drifting
flowing on a moan...
kissing tenderly
slowly melting,
and we were all alone.
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secretwind
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2004-06-30 20:44:09]
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Re: All Alone
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:19:07 PM AEST
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Very nice. Gentle passion.
The Voice
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Re: All Alone
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:46:34 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this very much... i will tell my friends... you put passion into words...
Tasha
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Re: All Alone
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:33:40 AM AEST
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Pasonate indeed!
Beautifull, heavenly write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: All Alone
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:27:36 AM AEST
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awwww great poem...this is lovely,
pixie xx |
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Re: All Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:56:33 PM AEST
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| excellent write. your work is truely unappreciated here. you need publishers. |
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