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Sonnet II = Carrying On
Contributed by
mdmorash
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 07:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wandering heartbeats now so lost in time.
Beating out tempos that may have been lost.
Trying to regain whatever the cost.
Hearing within them this long lonely rhyme.
Seeing the danger and wanting to climb.
Wanting no more than to thaw out the frost.
Freeing your heart from the pit it’s been tossed.
Waiting and watching the bells as they chime.
Let the things go that are holding you down.
Give unto you the things you need to live.
Don’t turn around for the past is now gone.
Rise to your feet and then straighten your crown.
Know what you need and prepare then to give.
That is the choice that will carry you on.
Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2004
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mdmorash
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2004-06-30 19:57:44]
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Re: Sonnet II = Carrying On
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:26:57 AM AEST
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Good work. I appreciate your rhyme scheme and the message you convey is involving and pertinent.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Sonnet II = Carrying On
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:21:14 PM AEST
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| i agree with neps. excellent sonnet. |
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