|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Breathless
Contributed by
luinil
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 07:52:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
One green traded for another,
Slow suicide
Screaming peace defended by few
Poison stream beating into us
Ancient beauty now parched
Dimming light casts shadows
No life left to drink
Copyright ©
luinil
... [
2004-06-30 19:52:37]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Breathless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:18:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Brief but brimming with poetic beauty, albeit at the same time conveying the sad truth about the current state of our environment. Beautiful write. |
|
|
Re: Breathless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:21:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| yes very true indeed. people seem to like this thing called living and they dont know by doing this they are killing themselves. great write =] |
|
|
Re: Breathless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:10:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I believe in all you have said - and am glad you posted it here - can't be said enough.
Thoughtful write. |
|
|
Re: Breathless
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:38:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
although short very powerful
pixie xx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
