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Struggling With My Feelings
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:53:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I heard of what he did to her
and he made me feel so foolish
and sometimes my anger and hatred
swells and festers like everyone else
but then
memories of his sweetness and gentleness
shine through the anger and resentment
and i'm swept away all over again
and I don't want to have to hurt him
but I may need to,
so he'll wake up one day soon
and realize that he's wrecking his life
and others along with it......
and he's loosing his chances for the future
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Re: Struggling With My Feelings
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:55:46 PM AEST
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very powerful poem......
pixie xx |
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Re: Struggling With My Feelings
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 02:18:32 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Struggling With My Feelings
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 02:18:33 PM AEST
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Oh very powerful indeed... but it's not someone like my bro that I'm struggling with the same exact feelings... especially when u say:
so he'll wake up one day soon
and realize that he's wrecking his life
and others along with it......
and he's loosing his chances for the future
Only it's she... the one that I've been writing about lately... I pray that she will do this one day soon... b4 it's too late.
Anyway great poem... I loved it... Keep writing
~Donna~ |
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