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Stereo Type
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I shaved my head
Such a simple thing
An act of playing dead
That came in from dreams
When I fill my lungs
Every breath comes undone
Like sea serpents
Down in the stream
Sucking the fruit of disease
Trying to tell me the signs
But I fall piece by piece
Losing evermore's line
And I guess I'm fine
Long time
But now I'm growing my ...
And I'm starting
To feel as if I care
Copyright ©
rhei76
... [
2004-06-30 12:31:35]
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Re: Stereo Type
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:46:07 PM AEST
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this one wuz a little different
blesse be
sirena |
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Re: Stereo Type
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:54:36 PM AEST
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wow that was intresting, great write,
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Re: Stereo Type
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:47:21 AM AEST
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very creative and clever how you ended it, poetry at its finest when you have us hear a word unwritten:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Stereo Type
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by Sinful_Misery on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:18:41 PM AEST
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| Kewl poem :) |
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