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in shreds
Contributed by
kammie
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:28:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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poems in shreds
my life in shreds
my emotions in shreds
my self in shreds
one person created havoc
in the calm sanctuary of life
one person
my maker
ripped me to shreds
stripped me of the pride
i had once held dear
of my life
a crumpled mess
on the floor
falling to the ground
to gather the pieces
of me
of paper
of memories
of emotion
the worst part is
as my maker stares
in disgust
at the crumpled mess
of me
Copyright ©
kammie
... [
2004-06-30 12:28:54]
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Re: in shreds
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:37:09 PM AEST
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| Good poem, show of emotion and thought. Hope you feel better. God bless you. Peace out. |
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Re: in shreds
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:48:21 PM AEST
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this poem came from the heart...i like it
blessed be
sirena
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Re: in shreds
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:03:22 PM AEST
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Very touching. The rhythmic flow of the read seems to fit perfectly with how you feel about the subject. I really hope things get better for you.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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