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Rain
Contributed by
juliette
on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You stand there, leering at me
From your side of this wall that separates us-
Composed of tears – yours and mine
And just strong enough to keep us at arms length.
Your cloud, bursting with bitterness and disbelief,
With a downpour that scalds from envy, desires revenge.
My cloud, far from angelic, but calmer still,
Compact with disappointments and chaste choices.
Our showers hurt over the way things were,
and the way things are now.
Copyright ©
juliette
... [
2002-10-22 14:45:00]
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Re: Rain
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:50:52 AM AEST
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| Bitter and sad... Still the emotions are strong and descriptive. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Rain
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:28:15 PM AEST
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good poem
it is kind of sad
to for a reason |
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Re: Rain
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by Cindy359 on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 08:23:54 AM AEST
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What a wonderful title you have chosen for this poem..I think it really fits.
A real good write....keep them coming.
Cindy |
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