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Eye Of The Sky
Contributed by
blueheart
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:32:06 AM in AEST
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Fiery ball of splendour,
Illuminating the scorching sky,
Rays of gold dip the lakes,
Majestic power held up high.
Quietly painting the horizon,
With bold hues of warmth,
Yellow, red and tangy orange,
Anticipation as the sunrise comes.
Basking within the subdued shafts,
Generously flowing from the eye,
Clouds are pierced as it shines,
Our beautiful sun, gem of the sky.
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blueheart
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2004-06-30 08:32:06]
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Re: Eye Of The Sky
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:53:16 AM AEST
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truely beautiful hanna, it made me feel a sunrises happiness and warmth:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Eye Of The Sky
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 10:59:15 AM AEST
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truly beautiful.....
pixie xx |
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Re: Eye Of The Sky
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 03:28:35 PM AEST
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Well, this is an excellent ascent from the wordless world, lol. I truly enjoyed this peace. It was comforting and beautiful.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Eye Of The Sky
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by venkat on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:27:49 AM AEST
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| very beautiful imagination...very refreshing lovely poem. venkat |
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Re: Eye Of The Sky
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:54:19 PM AEST
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Well I'd say u done a fine job of wiggling out.
did u ever notice that every time u bounce back it's much stronger than before.
Another thing this write is a masterpeice of beauty.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Eye Of The Sky
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:01:56 AM AEST
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| Wo Now this is Colourful ... I love it .. I love this kind of Colour.. Its the kind of poems i love to write... This is excellent... 5 .Point.. Great work.... |
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