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title removed
Contributed by
Nelly
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 02:13:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I saw the ad;
I saw you smile.
I clicked and entered
into your life.
www.ElisaMae.com
Still I browse around the site,
Getting to know you more
Everytime I surf
This net of life, of love?
I only ask
For you to check
My new site:
www.Ronell/heart/ElisaMae.com.ph
I hope you visit.
Copyright ©
Nelly
... [
2004-06-30 02:13:26] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: title removed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 03:50:32 AM AEST (User
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I'd visit if you'd included the hyperlinks properly.
But for now, i am lazy and cannot be bothered.
Intriguing poem, but not enough to make me stop browsing this site, thanks.
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