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no one ever sees
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:17:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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it's taken me
fifteen years
to realize
that no one is coming
to save me
that my happiness is gone
and it's never
coming back
people break
and others sit and watch
through their lids
with their eyes closed
and i sit with them
but i've cut my eye lids off
and i wish so hard that
i never had
that the sizzors
had kept quiet
in the kidergarden classroom
but they
just wouldn't
shut up
not one ever shuts up
but
no one ever sees
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Re: no one ever sees
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:20:57 AM AEST
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| ahhh!...i spelt kindergarden wrong and that'd be 'no one ever shuts up' ... sorry about that |
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Re: no one ever sees
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:12:51 AM AEST
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im sure that people do see, dont write everyone off so soon, great write
pixie xx |
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Re: no one ever sees
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:13:07 AM AEST
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i under stand the way you're feeling.
please don't give up hope.
just as a thought... why not do some thing to make others notice? it might be only a long shot, but it worked for me.
just don't do some thing life threatening!
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Re: no one ever sees
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:36:21 AM AEST
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| Sounds like you're giving up, which is understandable. People can be pretty dissappointing most of the time. Apart from the minor spelling errors, I thought it was an awesome piece. |
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