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Alex
Contributed by
Seans_Girl
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:20:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your arbitrary disappearance made a day seem like a year
Every day I would brood and think of all the things I fear
I always prayed for the day you would come back to me
Longing to change the unalterable past and go back to the way it use to be
You came back to me and made my heart luminous once again
My love for you was still and always will be like it had always been
As the sun would die down our love would carry on
Always and forever until eternity was done
You are entirely exquisite in my eyes
There is nothing about you that I despise
Except for your low self-esteem
You are everything that makes up my dream
Ultimately you see again the way I still feel for you
Wishing we could marry and make all our fantasies come true
It is impossible to say in words all the love I feel
Love can't be shown in just words, if the love is entirely real
I hope this gives you an idea how full my heart is with love
Every night I thank God for the angel he has sent me from above
I have been blessed with a virtue from the Lord
For I received a man whom I have dearly adored
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2004-06-29 23:20:27]
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Re: Alex
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:11:53 AM AEST
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| If you wrote that @ the age of 14, I am very impressed. Good job for such a young age. |
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Re: Alex
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:32:27 PM AEST
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| 14???? woah... i dont think i can come CLOSE to writing a poem that good...you did an incredible job! |
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