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Kill Me for It
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:41:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Kill Me for It
Another cycle complete
Indifferent to each other
Over the honesty told
You hate me
Because I told the truth
It was hard for me to do so
When a lie
Could've done just as well
When a lie
Would've been the best route
Another cycle complete
You can't understand
The motives behind it
You leave indifferent
And want to kill me for it
You are the one
That can't see past the hate
I am the one
To give the hate
You leave indifferent
And want to kill me for it
So kill me again
Like you did once before
To give me a bleeding heart
To show the world
Another cycle complete
Bleeding for release
When you kill me
For the price of honesty
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essentially9
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2004-06-29 21:41:12]
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Re: Kill Me for It
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 03:07:30 AM AEST
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Sometimes honesty is the only policy.
Well done for sticking with your honest guns.
You found a nice bit of inspiration as a result.
Well done. |
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Re: Kill Me for It
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 03:37:05 AM AEST
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| for he wans't honest with you,,,some are scared of the truth,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Kill Me for It
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:13:13 PM AEST
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| Amazing form the start to the finish..I wanted more here to read..But then again your poem's always do this to me..You have every line here down to a tee..Skills and talent add upto all of you. |
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