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My Dream place
Contributed by
TheNextRobertFrost
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I come to my dream place every day after school.
To lay in the fields.
To relax, get away from the world, and watch the butterflys flutter,
To look at the flowers glowing in the light and see the buttercups butter.
And at night i watch the fire flieis dance,
And watch the deer's last prance.
And stop to hear the last breeze reap.
And let the birds last songs put me to sleep.
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TheNextRobertFrost
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2004-06-29 21:13:05]
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Re: My Dream place
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:56:22 PM AEST
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This paints a very nice pic of a meadow or just living in the country. I know if I had a place like this, I'd probably get more inspiration, too. I liked this, it made me feel good. And isn't that what poetry is all about? Very nice write!
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Re: My Dream place
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:04:28 AM AEST
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beautiful, it sounds like a lovely place:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Dream place
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by brew on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:22:12 PM AEST
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| Seems thats a calming place for you, mine is the ocean.,,,,,,,,,but not close to me. Great senerio....and happiness.! |
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Re: My Dream place
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by lost_angeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:26:53 AM AEST
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aaaaaaawwww its a nice poem and its sweet
good work
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