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There's Something Soothing in a Rainbow...
Contributed by
Another_Dimension
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:26:32 PM in AEST
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With soul remained ash
away in the.....sea
with lickerish like kisses
For you and just.....for me
The colour red is....evil
Can be anger, can be...hate
The colour....green is evny
and Im not jealous you're awake
Yellow like...the sun
Blue is like the.....sea
Blue is like the tears i cry
Bue...really sums up me
Purple...and i cant breathe
And im surfing in the skies
red...the colour of blood
and of passion, lust and lies...
Blue...is like the sadness
Im fighting...everyday
Black is like my heart
but's not in the rainbow anyway
but imagine if....it was
Imagine if there was white
Which faded into black
to make so many greys
How gorgous would be that?
Or maybe im insane
Just like the colour violet
that pretty, simple colour
With the most attractive name
So next time you're feeling red
Just think about the rainbow
Why dont you try another emotion
Try another colour instead
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Re: There's Something Soothing in a Rainbow...
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by SugimotoYouki on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:43:40 PM AEST
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very, very beautyfull, dear :)
keep it going |
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Re: There's Something Soothing in a Rainbow...
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:55:31 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed this one, the "..."'s threw me off atfirst but other than that this was wonderful
and i think i have to disaggree with your statement"I dont think this is very good" because i loved it
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