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As The Thunder Storms
Contributed by
wakegurl77
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:35:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The rain pours
as the thunder storms
her eyes all red
as she lay in bed
hearts break
as pictures take
she loved him so
but that grew old
fed up was he
as was she
they flew seperate ways
but never forgot those days
clear as crystal
are these pictures
when her tears do pour
as the thunder storms
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2004-06-29 16:35:25]
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Re: As The Thunder Storms
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:00:06 PM AEST
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OUCH! NICE WRITE ABOUT THE THUNDEROUS SKIES & WHAT YOU FEEL INSIDE!! KEEP EM' COMING!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: As The Thunder Storms
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by dragon on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:13:11 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, keep up the good work
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Re: As The Thunder Storms
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:59:22 AM AEST
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wonderful poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: As The Thunder Storms
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:22:30 PM AEST
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short and sweet. I like it.
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