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Glass
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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in a world
of perfect sunshine
where the water
is a smooth as glass
the boys they smile
as the girls go wild
we all have fun
even when the day is done
Copyright ©
wakegurl77
... [
2004-06-29 16:02:19]
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Re: Glass
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:05:59 PM AEST
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Simplistic and easy to imagine.
I adore flat calms. You won me over.
I like it. |
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Re: Glass
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:28:24 PM AEST
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| Short and sweet. Very well written. Great poem. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Glass
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:39:06 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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